You have made a good start here but it was hard to mark as it was hard to follow - the slides are not all in order and some are not explained. You need to go back to the teaching blog and follow the order on the exemplar so that it flows and makes sense.
To improve: - reorder the slides - either find the Indian advert or write about the Muppet one - having both doesn't make sense - add audience details - there are none! - check you spelling, punctuation and grammar - there are quite a few mistakes - add print screens of the code rather than links - add a reference list
Harry,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here but it was hard to mark as it was hard to follow - the slides are not all in order and some are not explained. You need to go back to the teaching blog and follow the order on the exemplar so that it flows and makes sense.
To improve:
- reorder the slides
- either find the Indian advert or write about the Muppet one - having both doesn't make sense
- add audience details - there are none!
- check you spelling, punctuation and grammar - there are quite a few mistakes
- add print screens of the code rather than links
- add a reference list
Ellie